76 Lafayette Street Part 1 by Lavro Well, this is an excellent, exciting, titillating start to what I am sure is going to be a fun time for our protagonist. I am, to no one's surprise, a sucker for BDSM in conjuction with barbering, amd this is scratching that itch. I await the next parts with deep intrigue. by Fantasy Weaver on 23 Apr 2025
A Duty Beyond by Armando94 I enjoyed the story and the movement of where Angelo was headed. Of course, I like the continuation of having the same characters in the story. Thanks for writing and sharing. by Gator on 23 Apr 2025
Cathairsis (Part 13) by Fantasy Weaver domme girl from past comments here— reading these chapters late at night when my roommates asleep truly cures my college depression. this chapter in particular got me a little more emotional than usual. Reading the way Jacob spoke about Rah reminded me of pain i've dealt with my entire life, feeling like a pervert for being more sexually bold or unique and having people bully me or express disgust. Stories like these make me feel less alone. I don't think anyone really talks about how lonely it can feel to have a fetish, and although i've mainly worked through my shame and self-hatred, the sense of alienation persists. so, thank you for making me feel more seen and understood. Seeing Aden stand up for Rah made me feel like he was standing up for me. F***, i'm crying (it's probably hormones, i'll get out of your comment section) but needless to say im excited to read more. by . on 22 Apr 2025
Zero: God has nothing to do with this, apart from his son dying for these sins in particular. Jokes aside, thank you for reading and liking the Aden away from work/Rah. His denial has been steadily building, and this chapter wasn't even here in my outline, but I added it after thinking about it a bit. Needed to showcase his dilemma without directly interacting with Rah, as well as deal with other story beats that didn't fit in a standard "Picture" chapter. Yes, we will be seeing a slightly different Jasper to my (old, out-of-date) story. Fun times ahead...
IWasNeverHere: Once again, thank you for the constructive criticism (we all know it can sound like an attack, but yours truly does not). Noted on the descriptions, both the repetitiveness and the lack of detail for Rah; you can look through chapter 1 through 3 to get a better picture (was that an intentional pun? Perhaps). I actually have drawn references for my characters but I'm a little shy about posting them online - I think I mentioned studying in art in one of my stories a long time ago. I'm a very visual person, and when asked about how I write stuff, I describe the story as a painting, and thus, maybe my hyper-focus on certain details is caused by this? Who knows. It's not an excuse, and I strive to do better and to please the crowd :) The random bursts of shorter phrases come without warning and all I can do is wrangle them into the story before they get away. Thank you for your comments. It's thanks to these that writers grow and are able to interact with their audience. (And once again, my stories are for whoever the f*ck likes them.)
To the Domme: I'm truly honored, humbled, glad that my story has hit such a chord within you and resonated with you. People aren't always kind to others, and not always accepting of the particularity of a given person. We are lucky there are spaces where people with fetishes are able to discuss and explore them without judgement today, online or IRL. Fantasy aside, that feeling of alienation, I'm sure many people have felt, and Aden would be a poor excuse of a character to not say something in Rah's favor, especially considering everything that's already happened between them. Is it cruel for me to hope to make my readers cry, scream amd feel big emotions reading in the future? Perhaps, but I'm glad you felt something while reading. Take care of yourself! by Fantasy Weaver on 22 Apr 2025
Short Enough by Dwane.p9989@gmail.com Love'd it no better feeling then to feel your own shaved head would not mind to sit my butt right now on that chair having my hair shaved off by Skin fade on 22 Apr 2025
Cathairsis (Part 13) by Fantasy Weaver domme girl from past comments here— reading these chapters late at night when my roommates asleep truly cures my college depression. this chapter in particular got me a little more emotional than usual. Reading the way Jacob spoke about Rah reminded me of pain i've dealt with my entire life, feeling like a pervert for being more sexually bold or unique and having people bully me or express disgust. Stories like these make me feel less alone. I don't think anyone really talks about how lonely it can feel to have a fetish, and although i've mainly worked through my shame and self-hatred, the sense of alienation persists. so, thank you for making me feel more seen and understood. Seeing Aden stand up for Rah made me feel like he was standing up for me. F***, i'm crying (it's probably hormones, i'll get out of your comment section) but needless to say im excited to read more. by . on 22 Apr 2025
Corte de pelo a cepillo raimundiense 2 by BARBERO MILITAR Aquí se nos describe, de manera minuciosa, toda la normativa que en este internado existía en materia capilar; nada se dejaba al azar. El barbero no actuaba a capricho, tenía que cumplir con el reglamento y pelar rigurosamente a los chicos a cepillo raimundiense. Al protagonista y narrador de la historia se le nota que está emocionado con el tema. Nos da a entender que al resto de sus compañeros les atrae esta cuestión. La rebeldía, el espíritu crítico sencillamente no existen. Se someten como mansos corderos al ritual. La canción que durante décadas cantaban los veteranos es un ejemplo de lo arraigadas que estaban las tradiciones. No había lugar para la improvisación. Es un relato perfectamente estructurado y de un rigor excepcional. Ojalá se escriban más historias de este tipo y podamos leerla aquí. by Carlos Calvo on 22 Apr 2025
