But I have to add, head shaves are not just for summer. 365 days a year I am bald and enjoy not having any hair to fuss with. by Pauldy on 22 Dec 2024
"See you in court, Baldy!" by Manny Love this story hope the wife gets it stuck to her in the end by Anon on 22 Dec 2024
Cut Me from Your World (Part 2) by Fantasy Weaver Fantasy Weaver, that cameo was everything! Now, on the story and this characters, love to see a protagonist grow and change and a breakup haircut situation as only you could pull it off. by Zero on 22 Dec 2024
Oh, Indiana Jones. Pt 2 by TheFellowTraveler TheFellowTraveler, you have an unique proposition, taking well-known characters to star in your stories. I wonder if you have anyone else in line? But also, would love to read about your own original characters too by Zero on 22 Dec 2024
Immovable Object, Unstoppable Force (1) by Jamiesstories2 Jamie, first off, I am always happy to cheer on a fellow writer, no need to thank! Having said that: I need to know more about Oliver, academic rivalry has me looking forward to where this is headed and your prose is a delight to read. by Zero on 22 Dec 2024
Moms choice by Steve Mid of summer's too late. Maybe that's why she was made. Next time remind her when summer starts. And yes may she have her way by Rosemary on 22 Dec 2024
Surprise Summer Cut by Vedant Nice 👍 I like it a lot, keep writing stories like this by Deep on 22 Dec 2024
The perfect souvenir by Manny I love this story and can't wait for the next installment by Tony on 21 Dec 2024
Oh, Indiana Jones. Pt 2 by TheFellowTraveler @SailorNaruto52 thank you very, very much for these kind and beautiful words! I really appreciate it. by TheFellowTraveler on 21 Dec 2024
Oh, Indiana Jones. Pt 1 by TheFellowTraveler @Anon thank you very much! Means a lot by TheFellowTraveler on 21 Dec 2024
Viernes Trece by Barbero Militar Esta historia me ha fascinado, una de mis favoritas de las que ha escrito Barbero Militar. Los chavales se agarran a un clava ardiendo con tal de no ser rapados a maquinilla pero al final son derrotados. La azotaina que reciben por parte del precepto es una muestra de la intolerancia que reinaba en aquel centro educativo. Habría que saber el tipo de educación que recibió el tal don Juan Antonio; seguramente aplicaría el tipo de castigos que recibió en su infancia. La descripción del pelado es concisa, va a lo esencial. El autor se centra en describir el ambiente claustrofóbico en el que se desarrolla la vida de los jóvenes protagonistas. Es una historia verosímil, podría haber ocurrido de verdad. by Ley&Orden on 21 Dec 2024
Gangmitglied fürs Leben Teil 2 by Alpha97 Eine wirklich gute Fortsetzung von Teil 1! Es ist spannend, wie sich die Steigerung von den individuellen Frisuren zum gemeinsamen Merkmal am Ende vollzieht. by André28 on 21 Dec 2024
Rebranding by aells ¡increíble!, aunque me hubiera gustado que fuera mujer quien lo rapara by MCM Historias on 20 Dec 2024
Soldier or psychologist, what's best: 3 by thadeusz Similar to stories you have written before. A different subject moving forward perhaps. by Anon. on 20 Dec 2024
Johnny's impulsive decision by Manny Happy to see you posting again Manny! Thanks for these! by Linus on 19 Dec 2024
Cut Me from Your World (Part 2) by Fantasy Weaver This was such an emotional journey of a read. You have a gift for story telling, Fantasy Weaver. I’m in awe as usual. by Pixie on 19 Dec 2024
Justin's ginger braid by Manny Amazing. Sissy girly boy lost his ridiculously tail. Great story! by george wheeler II on 19 Dec 2024
Oh, Indiana Jones. Pt 2 by TheFellowTraveler Absolutely loved this! Both this and your Jack Kerouac story have such amazing and sweet romance in them. Excited to read future works from you. by SailorNaruto52 on 19 Dec 2024
Cortes de pelo de Cine 4 by BARBERO MILITAR Magnífica descripción de algunas escenas cinematográficas en las que se imponen rapados a la fuerza. Siempre está presente el ejército o la policía, es decir el orden y la ley. Una de estas películas, "La chaqueta metálica", es, sin duda, una de mis favoritas. El pelado que les meten a los nuevos reclutas es memorable, un verdadero icono del cine bélico. Los diálogos que se reproducen en este artículo son de gran calidad y sobre todo muy realistas. Barbero Militar no da puntada sin hilo.
by Ley&Orden on 19 Dec 2024
Immovable Object, Unstoppable Force (1) by Jamiesstories2 I Literally blushed reading this you should be publishing your writing to more sites so more people can read your work by Anon on 19 Dec 2024
Johnny's impulsive decision by Manny Sweet! Makes me yearn for something like this irl. Thanks as always Manny! by Armando94 on 19 Dec 2024
Immovable Object, Unstoppable Force (1) by Jamiesstories2 As always Jamie, you stun us with your wonderful writing. We can immediately see the characters' personality matching the title of this story, and how their different modes of thinking will affect the events to come or change with the flow of the story. I'm especially entertained by Jackson and his interactions with Oliver and his overall behavior. Of course, who would I be if I wasn't curious about the fixation with hair. That said, I'm eagerly awaiting the moment the pieces come together. In the meantime, I'll also be observing Ollie's "sinfully short" hair. Thank you for the mention, I will always cheer for any one of your stories! by Fantasy Weaver on 18 Dec 2024
Gangmitglied fürs Leben Teil 1 by Alpha97 Ein wirklich guter Auftakt. Besonders das Spiel zwischen Diversität und Einheit hat mir gefallen. Allerdings frage ich mich, wie eine Fortsetzung aussehen könnte, wenn bereits im ersten Teil das Thema Haare erledigt scheint. by robin92 on 18 Dec 2024
Immovable Object, Unstoppable Force (1) by Jamiesstories2 Good story but I can’t help but laugh at the phrase "armpit length hair" I realize you meant hair down to his armpits but it made it sound like his hair was the same length as armpit hair. by Anon on 18 Dec 2024
Death Sentence Part 8 by Sockboy Oh god, another amazing story! Keep writing these, the only thing that would have made this better is if Davey convinced Madden to stick to the Norwood 4 by giving him some release. Hoping you write more explicit scenes in coming chapters. by Anon on 18 Dec 2024
Oh, Jack Kerouac. by FellowTraveler I'm not sure how I managed to overlook this, but I am here now and I thoroughly enjoyed your work. As someone with a penchant for literature, and The Beats in particular, seeing the name Jack Kerouac was surprising to say the least, but pleasantly so. You say you're working on another story and I'm excited to read it, more of your writing will be a treat, I'm sure. by Jamiesstories on 18 Dec 2024
Cut Me from Your World (Part 2) by Fantasy Weaver This story was gorgeous and cathartic (and not just because Rah made an appearance). You manage to capture the mindset and experience of a person going through and subsequently recovering from abuse so effectively and beautifully; I am full of hope for Fenix and Ian. Although his name does not even deserve to be mentioned, I am glad Adder got a small piece of what he deserves, that was fun to read, to say the least. I could go on forever. Incredible work as always. by Jamiesstories on 18 Dec 2024
INCORPORACIÓN A FILAS 5 by BARBERO MILITAR En realidad, aquí se nos narran tres historias, tres situaciones relacionadas entre sí pero diferentes. El protagonista adquirió el hábito de hacerse cortar el pelo como un marine cada miércoles. Me imagino la angustia y nerviosismo que experimentarían los soldados cuando tenían que pasar junto al sargento de puertas, el encargado de mandar rapar a los chicos. El barbero joven era se rebelaba contra aquella disciplina capilar pero se había convertido en el verdugo del protagonista; la maquinilla avanzaba imparable, eliminando el cabello que tímidamente comenzaba a crecer. Lo de la revista de uniformidad también me ha puesto los pelos como escarpias. Me imagino el profundo silencio, los jóvenes rígidos cual estatuas, sintiendo el aliento de su superior en sus cogotes...
El protagonista se integró el el ritual del rapado ejerciendo como barbero el día de la incorporación de los nuevos reclutas. Es un relato perfecto y redondo que posiblemente esté basado en hechos reales; doy por hecho, sin embargo, que el autor se habrá tomado licencias artísticas para dotar a su historia de un mayor suspense. by Ley&Orden on 17 Dec 2024
Cut Me from Your World (Part 2) by Fantasy Weaver Absolutely wonderful. Your posts on here are amazingly written - the characters are always beautifully complex and feel truly human. I loved the haircut scene in this one and how liberating it felt to witness. You truly are a master of the craft.
On a less eloquent note: I was THRILLED to read about Adder's fun little experience in the mosh pit. Kudos to you, my friend! by FellowTraveler on 17 Dec 2024
Oh Brother Part II by deke Cutter Nicely tied up Deke. Love it when ass@#%%s like that get their come uppance. Would have been great to have the kids let him get arrested! by P.J. on 17 Dec 2024
Oh, Jack Kerouac. by FellowTraveler @Zero: thank you very much! I very much will, and the same goes for you; your pieces are always outstanding, and I can't wait to read more of them.
@Fantasy Weaver: to say that I am honored by this comment would be putting it lightly - thank you, most sincerely. The thought alone that you'd take the time out of your day to write such a beautiful comment about this story is making me tear up a little. You're one of the writers on this site to whom I look up to, so, thank you!
P.S.
I'm working on a two parter with a popular fictional character at the time of writing this, and I hope you'll like it :) by FellowTraveler on 16 Dec 2024
Rebranding by aells That ending was incredibly sweet, I love the happy ending. Fantastic story by Mobius on 16 Dec 2024
Affliction by Lavro Very well written and exactly what I’ve lived with for decades. by flattopme on 16 Dec 2024
