If this is your first go at writing, then you have a successful career in writing ahead of you. I thoroughly enjoyed this story as it was easy to rep and kept my interest.
Hopefully you have a Pt 2 where he settles in tanned and explores even shorter hair.
Please keep writing. This is great stuff. by Pauldy on 02 Mar 2025
NEXT, my turn, GULP! by Barbershop memmories Great series. Continue it with some more experiences by M on 02 Mar 2025
My Return To An Old Fashioned Barbers by Snipped Sam Love your stories. At that age I would have benefitted having a barber like Mr Carter - short sides and back. Could have used the discipline. Probably would have benefited with the use of a slipper once in awhile. by JJ on 02 Mar 2025
SHAVED SMOOTH. A BIRTHDAY HAIRCUT IN TWO by ANDREW As a committed bald head shaver for almost 26 years, I can hardly let my hair grow even a day. I do on occasion, suffer for a few days so I can treat myself to a barbershop head shave. It’s never as smooth as when I shave it myself, but it feels great to have clippers and razor run all over my head. I even make sure they put something on my head to give it shine. I am always envious of guys with shiny heads. Be proud of your bald head, don’t hide it! by Pauldy on 02 Mar 2025
My Return To An Old Fashioned Barbers by Snipped Sam I am fan of your stories. Though fantasies they are based on experiences and enjoy reading them more than once. by M on 02 Mar 2025
Jake Convinces Cody by ShaggyDS I get the sense this is AI generated by Anon on 02 Mar 2025
SHAVED SMOOTH. A BIRTHDAY HAIRCUT IN TWO by ANDREW I'm going to be kind with my comments. This wasn't a story - it was a forum post. Posting in all caps made it hard to read and made it look like you were shouting. by Anon on 02 Mar 2025
La primera vez by Chemex Sería rico poder precenciarlo en persons by Anon on 02 Mar 2025
Jake Convinces Cody by ShaggyDS Short and sweet, just like a man’s hair should be!
Jake also needed to hop in the chair for a tightening up of his own buzz cut. Time for him to explore an even shorter cut. Skinned sides with a 1 on top might just be the recipe.
Remember, shorter is better but bald is best! by Pauldy on 02 Mar 2025
Internado San Raimundo. Experimento 2 by BARBERO MILITAR Estas son las historias que me gustan a mí. Afeitar la cabeza a los colegiales es algo extremo, que casi nunca habrá ocurrido. Para hacer un estudio del crecimiento del pelo no creo que sea necesario tomar medidas tan drásticas. Los estudiantes no se rebelan, se dejan esquilar igual que las ovejas. Tuvo que ser una dura experiencia, aunque tal vez a estos chicos les diera morbo el tema. Si se llegan a enterar las autoridades escolares de este tipo de prácticas hubieran cerrado el centro y multado a la dirección. by Gregorio Peláez on 01 Mar 2025
Jake Convinces Cody by ShaggyDS Short but I liked it by Kolscoolkink on 01 Mar 2025
My Return To An Old Fashioned Barbers by Snipped Sam Excelente vuelta a una peluquería antigua. Creo que es la misma vivencia que hemos pasado muchos de nosotros. Gracias, Sam. by JEnrique. on 01 Mar 2025
A Guy Off the Street by Just_Me @Gator...I have an idea that I'm trying to make work. I'm not sure if it's going to develop or not...
@Deke...Thank you, kind sir. A compliment from a prolific writer like you is high praise. I appreciate the thought.
@Kolskoolkink...I appreciate the comment. I agree, it's not my best work.
@P. J....That is an amazing compliment. I'm grateful!
@Barbershop Thill...I'm trying to find a followup story line in my head, and I am entertaining that very thought. Are you psychic? HA
@ckbald...Thanks. Your kindness is always so welcome.
by Just_Me on 28 Feb 2025
Pelon Cartilla militar by Gerard Acá en Argentina no hay cartilla militar , te pelan al "doble cero" cuando te incorporas y , una vez adentro todas las semanas te hacen visitar al peluquero para que te pase la maquinilla N° 0. Me alegra tu rapado. by Antonio. on 28 Feb 2025
The evolution of Shaun by P.J. ¡esto está increíble!, conocí chicos autistas en la escuela especial, no los podía ver porque soy ciego, pero si sabía que a varios de ellos los rapaban e incluso los afeitaban a navaja, que el protagonista de la historia fuera mejorando para conservar su cabello largo fue increíble. by FCM Historias on 28 Feb 2025
A Guy Off the Street by Just_Me Hope you have a Part Two coming up for this story. by Gator on 27 Feb 2025
A Guy Off the Street by Just_Me Pretty solid for a new writer, you have room to improve but it's a solid start by Kolskoolkink on 27 Feb 2025
Premières expériences avec un horseshoe by Ti Pit Trop bandant!
Je rêve de me faire raser le crâne par un coupe-tifs autoritaire puis ensuite tout le corps - et tout spécialement le pubis et la raie du cul, sans oublier de bien nettoyer les aisselles - par un pote viril qui me branlera ensuite. by Mec à raser total on 27 Feb 2025
A Guy Off the Street by Just_Me Love this story, Just_Me. by ckbald on 27 Feb 2025
A Helping Hand by Armando94 Totally agree with Bald k. by Fred on 26 Feb 2025
A Guy Off the Street by Just_Me You're a great story teller. I like your casual descriptive writing style. Very easy to visualize what's going on. Keep writing. Nice that he didn't get completely shaved bald too. Maybe the barber leaves him a little longer next time. by P.J. on 26 Feb 2025
A Guy Off the Street by Just_Me Now he has to return with a flattop and a moustache by Barbershop Thill on 26 Feb 2025
Afeitada de cabeza como lección by Bg De las historia la más excitantes que he leído en este blog 😈 by Anon on 25 Feb 2025
An Old-Fashioned Barbers by Snipped Sam This is a well written story I loved it and can see me sitting in that barber chair having my short back and sides clipper'shaved 2 fingers above my ears and 3 fingers above my hair line in my neck bur secretly I prayed in my hart that the barber would cut it shorter and higher on the sides and back I wished that I has the guts to tell the barber to shave it very short and very high up on the sides and back. Love reading your stories wish you would right one 1⃣ day of a boy who's hair was shaved short with white'walls high up the sides and back and the top so thinned out and short that you can hardly comb it flat and need to use Brylcreem please keep your story's coming I love reading them by Skin fade on 25 Feb 2025
Death Sentence Part 9 by Sockboy Yup, I haven’t gone anywhere dude! You’re still not as bald as I am,
but you’re still considered to be "bald" …even by your own admission lol Yeah, you’re finally going to know the humiliation of having to be in the barbershop where you sit down next to another customer with full hair and yet your in and out within 5 minutes because you just didn’t have that much hair to cut. How are you going to feel when the barber runs the bare blade right over the top of your head to "just clean it up a bit" to clear off the embarrassing peach full? All in front of everyone else…Are you still going to make fun of my bald head now that you’re almost as bald I am? Dude, you’re going to look like such a geek sitting there in your white socks, wiggling your toes while the top of your balding head gets creamed and scraped and the barber gives you whitewalls around your ears and up the back of your neck which makes your big ‘ole ears stick out even more lol by LOVE THIS STORY on 25 Feb 2025
Afeitada de cabeza como lección by Bg De las historia la más excitantes que he leído en este blog 😈 by Anon on 25 Feb 2025
Fantasy or Reality Pt 1A by Just_Me Sorry about all the weird numbering on the titles. I had a problem with the character count, and had to divide a few of the parts up in ways I had not anticipated. This happened after I had already uploaded a few parts. I hope I got the continuity right, and didn't interrupt the flow of the story. by Just_Me on 25 Feb 2025
Zero: I'm glad you enjoyed the transformation, it was quite fun to write! Reflecting on how the stories mirror one another, I would say that's the point. All of these anthologies bring a little something to the table that influence how Aden and Rah interact going forward. I'm happy to know the pacing seems good for you. Of course, all your questions will be answered in future chapters, so hold on to them for now. As always, a pleasure to provide entertainment.
To the Domme: My stories' intended audience is "whoever find this to their liking and shares my very specific interests", so that makes you part of that! I do try very hard to convey the sense of a true D/s dynamic, at least as much as fantasy permits. And as for the hair, or attachment to it, I find it brings so much more complexity dealing with how a certain character feels towards their locks or loosing them. I will withhold any comment about Aden and clippers (for now...). Thank you!
Jamie: Once again we are here - you without words, and me, your tongue in my triumphant fist. In all seriousness, thank you for commenting. Rah's interactions with his subs are of course not going to be the same across the board. Different people, different desires, different handling and all that, and of course, we get to see other sides of Rah. Aden hasn't been oblivious to Rah and his feelings towards him or what he does. It was only a matter of time before a "problem" presented itself. Have fun discovering more stuff about them!
IWasNeverHere: Thank you for writing some thoughtful criticism! I am aware I do a lot of "telling" and I'm trying very hard to curb the bad habit. Talking with other writers and writing itself is helping, but I'm no professional, so slow progress there. Progress nonetheless though. Still happy that you enjoy my stories, despite my still-developing ease with it. Oh, and Aden? A brat? Interesting choice of words. Hehe. by Fantasy Weaver on 25 Feb 2025
Character limit Just_Me, I use either Word or Google Docs too. Very inexact measurement but in my experience if a story is reaching 20 pages, most likely it won't fit in a single part. However I know some contributors might have better insight on this, since they write longer pieces. Or maybe our site admin himself can weigh in? by Zero on 25 Feb 2025
What program do you use to type your story on?
I just posted a series, and Google Docs said that all the parts were WAY below the 65,000 character constraint of the site, but I when I went to post the series, the site said I had exceeded the character limit. I had to chop my stories into weird smaller portions, and would prefer not to have to do that in the future. by Just_Me on 25 Feb 2025
Cathairsis (Part 8) by Fantasy Weaver I really like your writing but I personally think you explain things too much as they are happening. Show, don’t tell. It kind of disrupts the flow during the more intense moments. For example at one point, Aden mused that maybe Keiji wasn’t from here. That kind of went without saying lol. Or explaining the process of the bleaching - wasn’t for me. Just a suggestion. :)
P.S. Aden gives me extreme brat energy…just saying… by IWasNeverHere on 24 Feb 2025
LA HABITACIÓN 2 by BARBERO MILITAR Cada vez Barbero Militar riza más el rizo, aunque al final todo el cabello acabe en el suelo. El joven leonés escoge como alojamiento la casa de un señor dispuesto a someter a su joven inquilino. La inmensa mayoría de los jóvenes de su época hubieran salido huyendo del lugar, sin mirar hacia atrás. No estarían dispuestos a someterse de esa manera. Sin embargo, Gonzalo siente cierta atracción por ser sometido por alguien mayor, para conseguir su objetivo principal: sacar adelante los estudios. El barbero Rapajipis utiliza todavía maquinillas manuales; esto no es algo casual, denota lo anticuado que se ha quedado, es alguien incapaz de evolucionar. Como premio a su obediencia, Gonzalo heredará los dineros de su protector y aquel chalé en una zona muy codiciada de Madrid. by Ley&Orden on 24 Feb 2025
IN THE ZONE by cut.the.flow Great story! Love the sexual tension between them and, of course, the buzzed off hair. Buzzed hair/ shaved heads are so erotic. I see other guys with shaved heads and just want to reach out and feel it.
Hopefully he decides he likes the buzzed hair and goes back for more. by Pauldy on 24 Feb 2025
Cathairsis (Part 8) by Fantasy Weaver Oh. My. God. I’m a bit at a loss for words I’m afraid because I’m blushing. Rah and Keiji’s interactions were so interesting to read and provide so much dimensionality to Rah as a character after watching how he treats Lucas. He truly is a good dom who knows what each of his subs needs, even if he is a bit heartless along the way. Watching Aden and Rah’s relationship grow and shift is captivating in an entirely different way. Aden being somewhat forced to accept his feelings for Rah at the end of the chapter? Gorgeous and hilarious. I can’t wait to see that develop. And Aden’s family? I’m curious, to say the least. Until next time, you cheeky bastard. by Jamiesstories on 24 Feb 2025
An Old-Fashioned Barbers by Snipped Sam Across generations and nations, I suppose the feeling equals the same! We want the feel and rush of the shorter haircut, but not the ridicule come schools return. Thanks for writing! by Armando94 on 24 Feb 2025
Tennessee Flattop by Kyle Shearing Make a part 2 please this was a good story by Anon on 23 Feb 2025
EL REBELDE by BARBERO MILITAR De nuevo todos los caballeros ultratradicionalistas y autoritarios se unen para acabar con la moda del pelo largo. Don Gregorio podría competir en intolerancia con cualquiera de los padres de otros relatos escritos por Barbero Militar. El hermano don Ambrosio, profesor del chico, no se anduvo con medias tintas a la hora de exigir un pelado en toda regla. El policía municipal aprovecha la situación para conseguir que aquel pobre muchacho acabe bien pelado. El oficial de barbería va a disfrutar de su trabajo, mientras le siega el cabello al chico a ritmo de maquinilla. La actitud del médico militar tampoco es muy tranquilizante para el protagonista: directamente acusa al chico de fingir un ataque de asma para librarse del rapado riguroso. Triunfo total de las fuerzas del orden frente a los amagos revolucionarios. by Ley&Orden on 23 Feb 2025
Hijo del Cuerpo 2 by BARBERO MILITAR Este guardia civil trata a su hijo como si fuese un delincuente de los que le tocaba arrestar. La verdad que no sabe dialogar con el chico, impone su voluntad y por la fuerza. Habría que estudiar el motivo por el que se comportaba así, de esta forma tan intolerante. Lo que queda más que claro es que el protagonista va a acabar pelón en contra de su voluntad. by Ley&Orden on 23 Feb 2025
Cathairsis (Part 8) by Fantasy Weaver im so invested !!!! i hope the new chapters come soon. maybe im not your intended audience, but im a female domme who's exclusively into cutting men's hair and most other fics don't have nearly as much emotional buildup, intimacy and truly accurate D/s dynamics as yours do. They usually feature little to no emotional attachment to the hair, and they usually go straight for head shaves or buzz cuts which i'm not into. Your work is refreshingly different; keep doing what you're doing! I would love to eventually see Aden squirm in fear and embarrassment from the thought of Rah's clippers :) by . on 23 Feb 2025
Death Sentence Part 9 by Sockboy LOVETHISSTORY I wondered where you were. Your comments make me so hard, how you go out of your way to detail my white socks, while I get humiliated by a man balding my head. I would love to be restrained in. A chair in my white socks with you taunting me. The idea of being powerless to escape while you threaten to make me bald in my white socks would make me wild. I wouldn't want anything to happen, but just knowing you have the power and the means would blow my mind. 'Oh f*** if he actually decides to, he can bald me in my socks!' by Anon on 23 Feb 2025
Superbowl Lost Bet by EE I agree, I loved the story, thinking back I had also lost a couple of bets over the past years and had my head shaved with a razor nice and smoooooooooooooth the first time ir happened I didn't want my head shaved and started to grow it again but the other lost bets I kept it shaved fo the next time i realized it's only hair it will grow back even if it takes a few months and was okay with the idea off having my hair shaved off... love to read more maybe some of the other frat's joined him shaving there heads to having a shaving party every one coming to the party and going home afterwards without a hair on their heads...Looking forward to part 2... by Skin fade on 22 Feb 2025
UNIVERSIDAD LABORAL MILITAR (ULM) by Barbero Militar Otra gran historia escrita por Barbero Militar. La ambientación es magnífica, se nos pone en contexto, cuando existían las universidades laborales. El tal Florentino era un rebelde en toda regla, un niño de papá malcriado al que los militares están dispuestos a someter a la más estricta disciplina. El choque entre la rebeldía, próxima al pensamiento de los hippies, y el espíritu castrense conlleva un cambio de imagen del joven: de melenudo a pelón en poco tiempo. Seguro que no se reconocería cuando se mirase al espejo. Su padre estaría encantado de que en esa academia militar metieran en cintura al chico. En aquellos años la disciplina brillaba con luz propia. by Ley&Orden on 22 Feb 2025
Forced by Dave it great teens to shave their head bald im happy for you by Anon on 22 Feb 2025
Cathairsis (Part 8) by Fantasy Weaver So much is happening in this chapter, and it’s so fun to read and see all these threads come together! Keiji was a delight. I can just imagine him with his new style, stunning people left and right. The interactions between Rah and Aden are still the heart of the story for me, and I love this game of mirrors between all the characters, how their stories reflect and connect with each other. The contrast between this chapter and the last perfectly balanced the pacing, giving the story space to breathe and shift focus to expand on itself. I’m still curious about whether we’ll eventually see Aden use the safeword and the hints we’ve gotten about his family. I am also looking forward to when Rah gets the wedding photos, obviously HAHA. Your skill just shines through this chapter and it is always an engaging, fun read. Cheers, admiration and more from your brother in writing. by Zero on 22 Feb 2025
Justin's Unexpected Discipline by Steveboy20 would love to experience this as a boy in his teenage years…. by <3 on 22 Feb 2025
