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A Normal Night Out... by Haircutter99

This is my first attempt at writing a story here. I have been a long time lurker. Let me know what you think. Sorry it is a bit short, but I still need more practice writing. I hope you like it!

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It was a typical Friday night at the bar. The place was packed with people trying to unwind after a long week of work. As Jack scanned the room, his eyes landed on a beautiful woman sitting at the bar, sipping on a drink.

He couldn't help but be drawn to her. She had long, flowing hair and a killer body. Jack mustered up the courage to walk over and introduce himself.

"Hi, my name is Jack. Can I buy you a drink?" he asked, trying to sound as smooth as possible.

The woman smiled and replied, "Sure, I'll have another vodka tonic."

Jack ordered the drinks and struck up a conversation with the woman, whose name was Sarah. They talked about their jobs, their hobbies, and everything in between. Jack couldn't believe how much they had in common.

As the night went on, the two of them became more and more attracted to each other. Sarah started running her fingers through Jack's thick, shaggy, blond hair. She leaned in closer and whispered in Jack's ear, "You know what I'd love to do right now?"

Jack shook his head, intrigued.

Sarah grinned and said, "I'd love to give you a real man's haircut. It would be so hot to see you with a mohawk."

Jack's eyes widened in surprise, but he couldn't deny that the idea was turning him on. He agreed to follow Sarah back to her apartment and let her give him the haircut of his dreams.

Once they were in Sarah's kitchen, Jack sat on a stool while Sarah fetched her clippers. She poured them both another drink and then began running the clippers through Jack's hair.

As the hair fell to the floor, Jack couldn't believe how freeing it felt. He had always been a little self-conscious about his long locks, but with each pass of the clippers, he felt more confident and sexy.

Sarah didn't stop until Jack was left with a short, spiky mohawk. She stood back to admire her work, a satisfied smile on her face.

"You look amazing," she said, running her fingers through his newly buzzed hair.

Jack couldn't help but agree. It was quite a shocking change. What would everyone at work say? Still, he felt like a new man, and he couldn't wait to see what other adventures the night had in store.

Sarah took Jack by the hand and led him up to her bedroom, where they spent the rest of the night exploring each other's bodies and satisfying their desires. It was a night Jack would never forget, and he knew he had Sarah to thank for it.

Comments
You're in luck! I just submitted a story about an experience that includes a gay relationship. Hopefully it is posted soon.
by Haircutter99 on 29 Dec 2022
You forgot that Sarah could have been John, a gay man !
by thadeusz on 22 Dec 2022
Thank you both for the feedback. I will try to improve in describing scenes and characters better for future stories.
by Haircutter99 on 19 Dec 2022
Ich kann mich Deke Cutter nur anschließen! Du hast eine tolle Idee aber eine Art von Leitfaden geschrieben.
Nimm Dir die gleiche Idee/Geschichte noch einmal und hole viel weiter aus, beschreibe die beiden Hauptakteure besser.
Was für ein Typ ist Jack? Was spielt sich in der Bar zwischen Jack und Sarah ab? Bring Spannung rein, lass Deiner Phantasie freien Lauf und Du schreibst eine hervorragende Geschichte. Hab den Mut dazu!!!
by Greyhound 58 on 19 Dec 2022
Good first try. You had a good idea. You might want to look at each "scene" in a story and think about how you could embellish it with more details. For instance, did Sarah have a history of doing this to guys. You could maybe talk more about Jack's history with his hair, or you could have gone further with what the reactions at work were. You definitely should consider writing more.
by Deke Cutter on 19 Dec 2022