Short Enough by Dwane.p9989@gmail.com Love'd it no better feeling then to feel your own shaved head would not mind to sit my butt right now on that chair having my hair shaved off by Skin fade on 22 Apr 2025
Cathairsis (Part 13) by Fantasy Weaver domme girl from past comments here— reading these chapters late at night when my roommates asleep truly cures my college depression. this chapter in particular got me a little more emotional than usual. Reading the way Jacob spoke about Rah reminded me of pain i've dealt with my entire life, feeling like a pervert for being more sexually bold or unique and having people bully me or express disgust. Stories like these make me feel less alone. I don't think anyone really talks about how lonely it can feel to have a fetish, and although i've mainly worked through my shame and self-hatred, the sense of alienation persists. so, thank you for making me feel more seen and understood. Seeing Aden stand up for Rah made me feel like he was standing up for me. F***, i'm crying (it's probably hormones, i'll get out of your comment section) but needless to say im excited to read more. by . on 22 Apr 2025
Corte de pelo a cepillo raimundiense 2 by BARBERO MILITAR Aquí se nos describe, de manera minuciosa, toda la normativa que en este internado existía en materia capilar; nada se dejaba al azar. El barbero no actuaba a capricho, tenía que cumplir con el reglamento y pelar rigurosamente a los chicos a cepillo raimundiense. Al protagonista y narrador de la historia se le nota que está emocionado con el tema. Nos da a entender que al resto de sus compañeros les atrae esta cuestión. La rebeldía, el espíritu crítico sencillamente no existen. Se someten como mansos corderos al ritual. La canción que durante décadas cantaban los veteranos es un ejemplo de lo arraigadas que estaban las tradiciones. No había lugar para la improvisación. Es un relato perfectamente estructurado y de un rigor excepcional. Ojalá se escriban más historias de este tipo y podamos leerla aquí. by Carlos Calvo on 22 Apr 2025
La mortificación. Segunda parte by BARBERO MILITAR Echo de menos este tipo de disciplina. A mí no me vendría nada mal que alguien me diera castigos asi. by Anon on 22 Apr 2025
Cathairsis (Part 13) by Fantasy Weaver That last comment was me btw lmao by IWasNeverHere on 22 Apr 2025
Cathairsis (Part 13) by Fantasy Weaver :).
Couple things:
- you say "honeyed irises" too much, it’s getting repetitive. I don’t think it’s necessary to mention his eye color unless we are speaking about the eyes. The same with the hair color of your characters. It’s much more effective when you remind us only occasionally of their physical traits when it’s relevant. Maybe try just replacing that phrase with a pronoun. I get you try to be almost poetic with your descriptions but it comes to a point where it’s obvious you’re trying to come up with different ways when a more succinct word would suffice.
- kind of in the same vein, I like when you’re randomly short and direct especially about more intimate things like Aden shoving a dildo up his ass, it creates humor.
- Also I’m having trouble picturing rah do you have any references for him because I’m mostly just seeing an amorphous faceless blob with black hair.
I never thought I would be commenting on this website lmao. What can I say, I love some male on male s**t. (Once again I am a straight female) by Anon on 22 Apr 2025
Grandpa by Chovanec A great story with very believable and realistic feelings. by Jajko on 21 Apr 2025
La mortificación. Segunda parte by BARBERO MILITAR Menudo sádico era aquel precepto. Hoy en día cerrarían el centro, como ha ocurrido con la guardería de Madrid el la que se maltrataba a los bebés. Sin embargo, en aquellos tiempos el control de los centros educativos simplemente no existía; así de traumatizados han salido los que fueron muchachos en aquella época. Hay que reconocer que es un relato costumbrista que refleja a la perfección la realidad de aquel tiempo. by Ruben Villanueva on 21 Apr 2025
A visit to Mr Giordano's by helping hand Wow, buzzed almost completely bald as a kid! I love it. Hopefully Bobby’s mother loved it too and made him keep going back to git almost all buzzed off. I like the temptation statement of unless you want it shorter. Sounds like Bobby could have left there completely bald. Maybe on one of his next visits, he opts to let the barber shave his whole head. We often think leaving a little bit of hair means we aren’t bald. But to many people anything as short as Bobby already had it, they would consider him to be bald. Hopefully you write a follow up where he has gotten used to and now likes it short. He then decides to let the barber shave his whole head. by Pauldy on 21 Apr 2025
Russell in training. Part 2 by strictsir Love your stories, @strictsir! Would love to have had my head buzzed to nothing when I was young. Buzzed or bald heads are much easier to take care of. Finding a barber like this one would have introduced me to being a bald head convert at a much earlier age.
Please keep your stories coming as they are very enjoyable. by Pauldy on 21 Apr 2025
